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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Mother (as in maternal parent) (04/24/08)

TITLE: Chalk Dust
By Annora Williams
04/27/08


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The basket of laundry sits in front of me as I fold a load of freshly washed and dried clothes. The windows are open and I can hear the sounds of laughter and playing floating in from outside. As I continue my task, I see three towheads run past as they chase each other around the yard. The sun is shining brightly down on them as the breeze ruffles their hair and rustles the leaves in the nearby trees. A smile plays across my lips as they flash past my view once again.

I stop mid fold and think to myself, “Why am I sitting inside on such a beautiful day by myself?” In a split second I make a decision. I put down the article of clothing in my hands and rise from my seat. These clothes can wait a while longer, but my children are only young once. I walk over to my stash of “surprises” that I keep handy. Rummaging through the collection of odds and ends I find the item I have in mind for today. With my treasure in hand, I head out the door to surprise my children.

I step out of the garage, have a seat on the rough concrete of the driveway, and begin to open the gift I have brought with me. My children pass by on another lap around the house. As they see me sitting there, their speed slows. Suddenly they all notice the box I am opening- a brand new box of sidewalk chalk. In a brief moment I am surrounded by excited chatter as they all start to make requests:

“Mommy, can you draw me?”
“I want a pink pig and a yellow lion.”
“Please draw me a giraffe.”
“Can I have a blue fish and a monkey?”
“Can I draw flowers?”
“Let’s draw all of us holding hands.”

I reply with a chuckle, “We can do all those things. I’ll trace all three of you first then someone can trace me. After that we can make a zoo on our driveway. We can add any and all of the animals you want.” My words are met with ecstatic responses of “YEAH!!!” Everyone reaches for chalk and the fun begins.

The next hour is spent laughing and drawing as we complete our zoo with a vast menagerie of brightly colored animals, both wild and domestic, in addition to the outlines of three children and a mommy to look over the zoo. A feeling of contentment and joy flows through me as I watch my children, now covered in chalk dust, looking over our joint project and adding things as they see fit. They are laughing, running, skipping-simply enjoying life on a beautiful spring afternoon.

There is nothing quite like a new box of sidewalk chalk to bring everyone together on a sunny afternoon to play and relax. I am grateful for these little slices of heaven because I know that all too soon they will decide that they are too old for this kind of silliness, but I intend to enjoy these precious moments as long as I can.


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Sara Harricharan 05/01/08
Oh I did like this! I could see it all happening in my mind. I loved to play with chalk and this brought back some happy memories. I'm glad that your MC decided to take the chalk out and not to worry about folding the clothes. Great job! ^_^
Sherry A. Jackman05/01/08
Delightful article. I, too, took time to play with my kids. Playing with children is sometimes overlooked. Good job.
Joanne Sher 05/01/08
Excellent descriptions, characterization, voice, storyline...Just plain EXCELLENT. I loved everything about this piece.
Carol Sprock 05/03/08
Most delightful! I especially liked how well you represented the chatter surrounding her when she unveiled her surprise.
Dianne Janak05/06/08
This was such a good example of taking a moment in time, expanding it with just enough description and character development to bring us into the story... GREAT writing here...
Chely Roach05/06/08
What a fabulous slice of life...well written with a powerful message. Loved it!
Karen Wilber 05/06/08
Sidewalk chalk is the BEST! This is an engaging story with a good message.
Debbie Wistrom05/06/08
Thanks for a wonderful afternoon. Your details had me on the fence enjoying the family fun.
Tessy Fuller05/08/08
One of my favorite scrapbook pages is of Aleigh's chalk art where she drew a cloud with purple rain. This was a great reminder that sometimes housework can wait. Congrats on placing 2nd this week!
Lollie Hofer 05/08/08
What a great story. The imagery was excellent and the message delightful. I had to laugh...just bought a HUGE box of chalk for myself and my granddaughters. Congratulations!