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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Mother (as in maternal parent) (04/24/08)
Sometimes we aruged. She felt as if she was alway right and I was wrong. I alot pain was created alot bounds were broking.I pushed her away but she kept pushing closer. She pushing away now I'm pushing closer. Lord I'm crying out in her behalf Lord show my mother that you are her everlasting love like she was mine. All those nights I did come home.The salt tears that ran down her face wondering "Why does she act this way ,I've done so much for her but all she cause is pain. Lord remind her of those moments and touch her heart. Let her know you feel the same . You died for her and keep blessing her inspite of her behavior. You love her the way she want everyone else to love her. You'll stick closer than any friend.It's funny how tables turn she use to be down her knees praying for me. She use to beg that I would change so I could live .Lord now I'm here pray tasting those same salty tear drops . I want her to live again and to rememeber how good it felt to be home.How it felt to have your gracies and mercies new everyday.Waking in the mouring with a song on her heart and testimony that she had to shout from the mountain tops. I'm here Oh 'Lord with that same faith that can move mountains.Standing on the word that she taught me when I was young. Yes me Oh'Lord the same that departure from but came back to you. Entering into the holies of holies with boldness like your word says . Believe you are the only that can remind her how good it felt to call on your name and be saved. Take her back to were she first shout out you name in despair and you saved her. Let the scales fall from her eyes and see how far you left you back . Then Lord let it sadden her soul and let her call Abba Father I need you now . I cant do this on my own Lord forgive me and come on home.
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Sara Harricharan
05/01/08
oh my! A lot of raw emotion here. I feel for you, this must have taken something to write. Your title fits it though. Thank you for sharing this piece! ^_^