The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
Good job! I enjoyed your story very much. With a little tightening up, this could be a real winner. You drew me into Karen's world and made me care about her, which is the goal of any writer.
Looking forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
06/08/05
Nice, oh, you might tighten a bit - editors like to say that, but this is a very pleasant piece to read. Thank you.
06/08/05
You did well in giving faces to the homeless and forlorn.
06/09/05
Exactly! When I want to know what happened next, the writer has a good HOOK. This could be expanded to an excellent short story. Very nice. :0)
06/10/05
A touching story.
How sweet. I enjoyed reading from start to finish. Nice job.
Wow! Great work. I didn't get to read many of the Easter entries while the challenge was on, but I'm glad I came back for this one. You made me feel Karen's lonliness and fatigue. I loved the memories evoked by the tulip. Very well done.