The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
Oh I love that ending! And the lullaby with "Love my little bit a lot" That was cute, especially to see how the years progressed and each time it was different, but with a gentle brush of a kiss. Nicely done! ^_^
05/02/08
I loved it--from the beautiful title to the sweet ending which brought tears to my eyes! I appreciate how you wove the mother's singing throughout this excellently written piece! :) You have talent!
05/04/08
Beautifully told. I love your dedication at the end.
05/07/08
This was just a beautiful gentle story. Motherhood is tough, single motherhood is tougher. I just loved the last sentence, it reminded me of one of my favourite Bible verses Zephaniah 3:17. You've done a great job here, well done.
05/08/08
This was very sweet and congrats on first place!
05/08/08
What a tender, loving story! And what a well-deserved win!
I'm so glad I had a chance to read this. Congratulations!!
05/08/08
Oh my...I loved this...adored this...bathed in it's preciousness. This was PHENOMENAL writing; the progression of the songs, the pjs and bed clothes, all made this an excellent piece. Did I mention that I loved it? Congrats on your 1st place ribbon...you so deserved it.
05/09/08
CONGRATULATIONS on your 1st place! I am so glad to see that your story won, as it was one of my favorites this week! You do have a gift! Enjoy your new home in Intermediate (but I bet you move up again soon!) :)
05/16/08
Oh! I absolutely loved this! I can see how you got 1st! Great job!
Laury