The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
A letter to mom! I like the warm, heartfelt tone that is carried through. And especially the p.s. at the end. That was a nice touch.
I like the idea of writing a letter to someone as your article. Your message was well received. I could feel the pain of your loss but also the love you shared. My favorite sentence is: My joy is like a roller coaster. Our joy, on our own, has its ups and downs. His joy is constant and perfect. This was very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
05/06/08
This was very well-written and captured a deep love for a mom that is missed very much.
This was very moving and I could feel your emotions as you wrote the letter to your mother. My mother is also with the Lord, and I often ask the Lord to tell her I love her.

This is a different take on the topic and you've done a great job, well done indeed.