The Official Writing Challenge
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A letter to mom! I like the warm, heartfelt tone that is carried through. And especially the p.s. at the end. That was a nice touch.
I like the idea of writing a letter to someone as your article. Your message was well received. I could feel the pain of your loss but also the love you shared. My favorite sentence is: My joy is like a roller coaster. Our joy, on our own, has its ups and downs. His joy is constant and perfect. This was very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
This was very well-written and captured a deep love for a mom that is missed very much.
This was very moving and I could feel your emotions as you wrote the letter to your mother. My mother is also with the Lord, and I often ask the Lord to tell her I love her.

This is a different take on the topic and you've done a great job, well done indeed.