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05/01/08
Oh wow! I can relate to this so much as my own mother is facing the end of her life.Yet, we are praying and standing on the Word. Ny heart goes out to you. I can't imagine life without my mom. Right now the positions have changed and now I am caring for my prescious mom. Lord bless you and may the wonderful memories she has given you stay with you until you see her one day. Hugs! Janice
05/01/08
Beautiful. I had tears in my eyes at the end.
05/01/08
Great rhyme here! The pace, the story and everything. I loved the calmness of the mother. Wonderful. ^_^
05/01/08
Losing someone to cancer is a tragic time, but knowing they are going to heaven gives much comfort. You captured the hope of that in this poem. You had some great lines such as "Mom quickly put us all at ease, She showed again her expertise" They flowed nicely. However some lines didn't match up as well, you lost some flow in these lines I thought "My brainís in shock I can not think
Those words my brain just would not drink"
05/01/08
I like this poem. You've clearly described the hope your mom had as all of you faced her passing away. Great!
05/02/08
What a nice way to give tribute to your mom.
05/05/08
Although I'm not a big poetry fan, this one did touch my heart. It spoke the truth about your pain in a poignant manner. I enjoyed this one very much.
03/22/10
Just wrote it and I think it is cool, this birthday was the hardest yet and I miss her