The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
You brought back a lot of memories with this story! I enjoyed reading about your special relationship with your aunt. It was fun to drift back in time!
Lots of memories for me too, since I am the same age as "Julie". And Tijuana Brass is still among my favourites!
04/26/08
You have all the elements of a great story, anticipation, conflict and then a happy ending. I enjoyed it, good writing.