The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story and characters. You kept me interested from start to finish!
I love these precious aunts, and the priceless lesson they tenderly impart to their niece.
It saddens me when I meet people who are much more focused on marriage than they are on God's plan for their lives.
Nice story, and nice lesson. I did find a few spelling and punctuation errors, and I thought the dialogue sounded stiff. I really enjoyed the Daniel/Rusty/Dusty scene, especially since something very similar happened in my own family. My grandmother's nickname Babs was changed to Barb because my grandfather didn't hear it properly.