The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 526 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/24/08
Delightful characterization, and an excellent job showing the MC's emotions. Very nicely done!
04/25/08
You did a great job of building the tention to the climax of encountering his aunt. It is a wonderful gift to be able to diffuse someone's anxiety.
04/26/08
Well done I like the way you showed your preconcieved notions of the family were unfounded and you were readily accepted because you brought happiness. Well done keep writing.
04/28/08
A good piece. Wonderful that an in-law aunt adopted you from the start and you became good mates.

Enjoyable, well written and keep giving us this good stuff.
04/30/08
Tender portrayal of this beloved family member. Nicely done. :)
05/02/08
Very well written, I liked Aunt Tootsie.

This is a really wonderful compliment to her of your appreciation.