The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
I really enjoyed this a lot. My husband and I are always talking about how different smells conjure up memories. It captures not only a funny little quirk of life - like different smells triggering memories, but it also warms your heart at the beautiful tradition that was shared. Although, it did leave me with a craving for cinnamon rolls.
04/24/08
Great reminder of the simple gestures in life that leave a lasting impact.

I like your scripture reference at the end. It fits well.
04/25/08
A lovely, heart-warming story.
04/26/08
Great title, and wonderful descriptions. This was a lovely, enjoyable read.
05/01/08
Very nice entry, and I congratulate you on your "Highly Commended" placement! What wonderful memories certain smells can conjure up! :)

I would recommend reading your stories through before submitting to catch a few punctuation and spelling mistakes, but still your story came through clearly. I liked your ending, too!
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is a really nice walk down memory lane. And now I'm craving a cinammon roll. :)