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Excellent writing with a touch of humor - loved it! And the title is great too (I love a great title) I actually didn't know that was the reason we're supposed to go to the dentist twice a year. Hmmm. Learn something new every day. LOL
I noticed only a couple of grammatical errors but your talent is evident. I think you should definitely move up to the Intermediate level. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
The title drew me in, pretty good writing, you might have someone look over your essays, before posting, to insure grammar and glitches are taken care of.
Great title grabber and very cute article. I will read you again.
Cute. I was thinkng the other tooth checking time might be in April, which is 6 months after that "H" day to which I choose not to give any credence; but nevertheless, it is filled with sugar and is in October.:0)
I loved this -and I think you may be right...... :)
What a wonderful humorous piece! Is that the reason we had to get a loan for my husband and my dental work this year? Very, very clever writing!