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06/07/05
Excellent writing with a touch of humor - loved it! And the title is great too (I love a great title) I actually didn't know that was the reason we're supposed to go to the dentist twice a year. Hmmm. Learn something new every day. LOL
I noticed only a couple of grammatical errors but your talent is evident. I think you should definitely move up to the Intermediate level. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
06/08/05
The title drew me in, pretty good writing, you might have someone look over your essays, before posting, to insure grammar and glitches are taken care of.
06/09/05
Great title grabber and very cute article. I will read you again.
06/09/05
Cute. I was thinkng the other tooth checking time might be in April, which is 6 months after that "H" day to which I choose not to give any credence; but nevertheless, it is filled with sugar and is in October.:0)
06/10/05
I loved this -and I think you may be right...... :)
06/11/05
What a wonderful humorous piece! Is that the reason we had to get a loan for my husband and my dental work this year? Very, very clever writing!