The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
I have a three year old that loves to ask Why so I totally related to this. It was a good read.
04/24/08
What a precious story!
04/26/08
This is absolutely precious - your descriptions, characterization and storytelling are wonderful. I can't believe you will be in beginners for very long. I truly enjoyed this piece.
05/01/08
What a CUTE story! Many congratulations on your "Highly Commended" placement! The dialogue between the aunt and toddler was excellently written, and the ending line made me laugh! Great job! :)
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is really cute. I love the dialogue, especially of the little girl. Perfect. Nice job with the topic.