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04/25/08
Wow, this just reeks of bitterness, I love it.

I thought the grammar was a little choppy, but it works so well for this article. It gives it impact, like the anger is so great that Betty is just spitting out the words.

Great job, I pray this is fiction, if not praise God for the growth of a "pen missionary" from this pain. Keep writing!
04/26/08
So vivid - and definitely a very, VERY unique take on this topic. I also hope it is not true - it sure read like it was, though. Very engaging.
04/27/08
Rather startling, very angry. But it sounds as if your MC turned what was bad into gold, thank you. I too hope this was just an excellent piece of fiction.
04/28/08
The Uncle and Aunt are not animals. If an animal adopts an orphan, it cares for it well! You have put so much emotion into this piece that it radiates it out again—perfect for a spiteful letter.
04/28/08
What a sad story! I am glad you had it in your heart to forgive in the end....It couldn't have been easy to forget the wrongs done to you. But now it looks like you are getting on with your life...God bless you...Helen