The Official Writing Challenge
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Aunt was obviously an excellent manager as well as a caring person. Wonderful to have a mentor like this. Take care with spelling and grammar, and you will have a much better story. God bless you.
04/26/08
What wonderful memories - thanks so much for sharing them.
Putting space between your paragraphs would make this a bit easier to read, and a bit of attention to grammar and punctuation would help it flow.

What a Godly, wonderful aunt you had. Lovely.
04/28/08
Amazing. Loving work seems to be a paradox—work sounds like something that has to be done. But having the children work without knowing it is a really good recipe. I don’t know about loving work, but I loved this piece.