The Official Writing Challenge
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Ok, grab the tissue box please. This is so touching. I love the relationship between Titi and her niece and how she loved life. Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing this. God bless and keep up the writing!
A lovely memorial. A well-told story. Watch for missed words. Keep writing. God bless you.
04/25/08
A lovely, lovely tribute. Some wonderful details in here that made this piece especially poignant. Enjoyed this read very much.
04/25/08
Absolutely beautiful memorial to a wonderful lady. Great work!
04/26/08
Beautiful story of a beautiful lady, thanks for sharing a piece of her with us.
04/28/08
Great introduction. The word “boom” sounds more like an explosion than a fall down the stairs, and your story was certainly an explosion of activity. Like your narrator, I was desperately searching for what had gone wrong. One thing struck me as weird though—how can someone be so sick they fall down stairs then get up and dance?