The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
You have some chilling descriptions of how the enemy of our souls tries to come and whisper discouragement in our most desperate times. Prayers are very often answered in ways we'll not fully understand until we get to Heaven, and you gave a vivid example of prayers being answered in a scary situation.
04/19/08
Assuming this is a true story, it is awe inspiring! With some editing help of spelling and sentence structure - this could be a sensational story! For instance the spelling of "eerie", etc. and the confusion the reader has with who is "she"? etc. but keep at it...this is really a remarkable story. (Practise Makes Perfect, you know!)
07/18/08
Wonderful piece!!! Thank you!! Anita