The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Yes, no one ever said being a parent is easy! It's the good and the bad that makes up those complicated relationships. You shared your heart honestly with this entry.
04/18/08
Your voice was casual and enjoyable to read--it felt like a conversation with a friend.

I was confused by your opening with "Huh?". You might also want to count the number of questions you have here--in a very short essay, that many questions leaves your reader, well, answerless.

You're a good writer, and I expect to see you doing well.