The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazingly, amazingly powerful. Your descriptions are incredible, and your message excellent. I can't imagine you will be in beginners for long. Just WOW.
Excellent writing, very powerful.

A little bit more attention to paragraphing would help a lot.

This is a very strong entry.
Wow! That was a interesting story. That was quite a typical change that the father could change from a heartless evil man to a man who begged for forgiveness. For some people either than Peter, some people take a long time to heal from what had happened to them.