The Official Writing Challenge
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Your words are so descriptive I would have loved you to use the entire 750. The second paragraph from the end is my favorite.
04/19/08
Lovely descriptions. You had me enraptured.
04/21/08
Good descriptive phrases. Keep writing and you will do well.
04/22/08
Your writing has got good concentrated description. Like someone dazzlingly dancing with many twiddle steps. You are on your way to run rings round us!
Thanks for sharing.