The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/08
Sweet. I loved your description, especially at the end.
Aww, what a lovely story. I liked the way you talked about your fears based on your relationship with your own father. This is a good entry. Well done.
04/21/08
Very touching. Kill the exclamation mark. Nice and tight writing. Thanks.