The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
You have many wonderful thoughts in this writing. Maybe in poem form, it would give the reader time to pause and take in each idea?
06/07/05
Great word. If you desired a longer piece that people could connect with emotionally, you could lengthen it a bit with more thoughts and descriptions. I'd love to see what you could do creatively with this excellent word.
Blessings, Lynda
06/08/05
Yes, you definitely have the basis of some very good teaching.
06/09/05
Tight, but complete in thought and meaning. Thank you.
06/10/05
Very good ideas. A couple typos (I tend to read what I thought, not what I actually wrote. I find reading it outload helps me spot mine, and sometimes I still miss some lol.)