The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how she turns it all over to God. Very nice descriptions too. I felt like I knew her and her family.
"This too shall pass". It really will. Just keep being a mom and don't ever let up. My son will soon be 18, going off to college and is leaning more on me these days, all the while leaping forward with his life. It's awesome. Your writing was interesting and you manage to capture the moment of frustration with your words. It made me breath deeply. Nicely done.
Love the values the mother has for her children. I would love to see some more colorful wording. Really hits home and encourages me with my own teenage boy.
Good descriptive language. Tight. I liked it.