The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
This reads like a mosaic of memories that makes up your grandmother. I loved the different bits and pieces you have here, like fixing her hair and keeping the dog away from the kitty. Good job. ^_^
Thank you for sharing your memories of your grandmother with us.

You have some missing and misspelled words, but these are minor errors that can be easily fixed. If you need to, have someone proofread your entry before you submit, because it's easy to miss little errors. I do it all the time in my writing. :)
04/15/08
Yes, I need someone to proof read for me; it's so easy to read what you think you've put and really it's different.

You've baked a rich cake with all those ingredients.

I enjoyed a piece - keep writing!!