The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
Hmmm, this reads like the beginning of something bigger. It seems like a lot of research went into this piece! The storyline was interesting to hold my attention and I was curious as to where the story was going. Nice job-your last line is good. ^_^
I found this piece to be very deep. I can tell that the writer knows what he/she is talking about. I didn't understand all of it, due to my lack of plant knowledge and African culture, but I still found this story to be interesting.

I agree that it appears to be a story that could be continued and expanded upon.

Thank you for sharing.