The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the chuckle in here! I liked her sense of humor, that was very creative to work into here. My favorite lines though, were when she was chasing the coffee bubbles...great job! ^_^
Nice character sketch--I'd have liked more that showed her sense of humor. She was an intriguing person.
This was a good start, but I felt like it needed more filling.
I enjoyed this glimpse into your grandmother's life.

This felt kind of short to me, and I would have liked to read more about your grandmother, especially more about her humor.

Thank you for sharing this. Keep on writing.
Great...God bless.
Great article, Sunny! Thanks also for commenting on mine, entitled OW!
It was my intention to write something funny/fictional,frankly, it's not one of my best!!!!

Happy New Year to you and yours,


Really enjoyed reading this article Sunna. Sounds like you had a great relationship with your gramma. We are enjoying that with our grandchildren now. At least with some of them as we only have 24 at present. I don't know if I had ever thanked you for your kind comments on my poetry. It probably is a tad belated. THANK YOU. GARY JAMES SMITH . HAVE A GREAT DAY.