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04/10/08
It sounds as if your grandchildren are very blessed to have you.

A few things: exclamation points are best used for dialogue, rarely in narrative. And in one paragraph you switched briefly from 1st person to 2nd.

This is a sweet entry, with a fine voice.
04/10/08
Oh-you list all the wonderful reasons for looking forward to the time my one and only son is grown and is blessed with a family of his own. You gave many great examples of the things you can do with your grandchildren; think of the fun you'll be having for years to come!
It sounds like you have a ton of fun with your grandchildren. Thank you for sharing all of the wonderful aspects of being a grandparent. Though I am not even a dad yet, I could still appreciate this.
04/12/08
I enjoyed reading this. It made me feel like part of the fun. Nicely done.