The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
Lovely sentiments about grandparents--makes me look forward to that phase of my life.

I'd encourage you to look for more complex and original rhymes. Rhymes like "love" and "above" can be found in so many poems--work on finding ways to make yours stand out from the rest.
04/10/08
It's wonderful to think of the ways that grandparents can enhance a family! Many good thoughts presented here.
I liked this poem. It flowed nicely, and it definitely fit the topic.

Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the good writing.
I liked this line: Is a library of childhood facts that overflow Sweet poem.
04/12/08
Simple but eloquent. A nice poem and it admirably sings the praise of granparents.
04/30/08
Hi Kathy! I'm sorry I didn't know you submitted new work. (I was supposed to get an amail notification but never did) Love the poem! Very sweet and true. Good work.