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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Grandparent(s) (04/03/08)

TITLE: Where
By Barbara Peterson
04/04/08


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Where

Where you going?
Grandfather’s location are with whom they have access by faith with acclimation:
Their including places of abode and avoiding places of wrath for every nation, and
Leaving point of destination with requirement of no inflation or indignation.

Where are You?
Naturally grandfathers work leaving a job as if into a celestial globe.
They face a phone surrounded with an ecclesiastical robe.
Nightly they rest on a bed to prepare for future probes.

Where are you to Be?
Future steps leave kin as a beuchler,
Eternally grandfather’s good action reward's them with no damnation,
And finally their resting place -HEAVEN-WITH JESUS CHRIST OUR SURE FOUNDATION.


.Where and what has happened?

Memories recall the actions of long ago.
Memories of the of the just are blessed.
Grandfathers actions were some seed being sown,
Causing hearts to be impressed.
Now where have all the Souls gone?
In the final morning dawn.


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Joshua Janoski04/10/08
I have to be honest. I didn't understand this piece or its relationship to the topic. It may be because I am not very good with poems, and I am somewhat simple minded. LOL. :)

Thank you for sharing it though.
Dee Yoder 04/12/08
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this topic. God bless your writing.
Joanne Sher 04/12/08
You did a nice job with the rhyme in this piece. Was a bit hard to follow, but I enjoyed the rhythm of it.