The Official Writing Challenge
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I have to be honest. I didn't understand this piece or its relationship to the topic. It may be because I am not very good with poems, and I am somewhat simple minded. LOL. :)

Thank you for sharing it though.
04/12/08
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this topic. God bless your writing.
04/12/08
You did a nice job with the rhyme in this piece. Was a bit hard to follow, but I enjoyed the rhythm of it.