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04/10/08
I enjoyed spying on this precious visit between grandfather and granddaughter. His example of commitment is a wonderful legacy.
04/10/08
This reminded me a lot of my Grandma and Grandpa. She had a stroke, and my grandpa took care of her until she died. He loved her a lot.

You painted a great picture of a wonderful relationship between a grandfather and granddaughter. Thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed it. :)
04/10/08
What a lovely story of love and commitment and the role and example grandparents can have in the lives of their grandchildren.

Well done.
04/11/08
Such loyalty is sadly rare now. The start to their marriage seems to have been the start to a good one.
04/12/08
So sweet. I enjoyed the voice of the grandpa especially.
04/14/08
This was very good. Having grandparents in a nursing home, you did a great job describing the atmosphere of the place. Loved the way the characters were weaved in.
04/18/08
Congratulations, Amanda, on placing 8th in your level with this piece. Great work!