The Official Writing Challenge
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Good thoughts. With some tightening up, this could be a really good article. In a couple spots I felt the flow was a bit rough. Conveying our thoughts clearly takes time to learn. Good effort though. I look forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
Thanks for posting.
Blessings, Lynda
On the right track. As mentioned above, tighten and clarify. Thanks for posting.
Amen! Too many people rely on artifical things for joy. I enjoyed this.
I liked the concept of having joy as a prescription for us all.