The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/05
Good thoughts. With some tightening up, this could be a really good article. In a couple spots I felt the flow was a bit rough. Conveying our thoughts clearly takes time to learn. Good effort though. I look forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
Thanks for posting.
Blessings, Lynda
06/08/05
On the right track. As mentioned above, tighten and clarify. Thanks for posting.
06/10/05
Amen! Too many people rely on artifical things for joy. I enjoyed this.
I liked the concept of having joy as a prescription for us all.