The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
A good illustration of "making hay" (or Christmas ornaments! :-)) The overall tone of the story is nice, and gives me a good feeling. You might want to work on using more "active" verbs (fewer was's and were's) as a way to strengthen your writing. Keep writing and God Bless!
Great creative imagery!
03/15/08
This is a very creative piece. I like how you looked outside of the box to make money for what you wanted. Good writing!
Laury