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03/14/08
This is beautiful--a morning meditation that reads very much like a Psalm in prose.

A few word nitpicks: my spirit soars, not sores, and watch out for "it's" instead of "its."

Very nice writing.
03/15/08
I really liked this. It was very peaceful and serene. I especially liked your last paragraph:)

"As our relationship began unfolding, it was apparent God longed for me to see this revelation. We started to play a game of hide and worship. Every day, He reveals something of His glory and every day I watch with great anticipation to proclaim how awesome my God is."

Very good!
Laury
03/15/08
Wonderful observations and message. Today is indeed the day of our salvation, so let us spend time with our Creator today, and enjoy the wonders He has prepared to share with us.
This is lovely. I enjoyed it very much and read it several times. Thank you for reminding us of the importanc of praising and worshipping our heavenly Father every chance we get. Well done.
07/18/08
Today is truly all we have because yesterday is gone and we are not assured of tomorrow. Your pieces are beautiful!! Anita