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A very beautiful illustration of the topic. I enjoyed this piece. Thanks.
I enjoyed the way your story brought the woman to life for the reader. I especially liked the ending. Good job!
Very well written account of this story. Nice job. :)
Very good writing! Awesome work!
Coleene, I plan to feature this lovely little story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 16. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
Congratulations on your featured story, so beautifully written. You brought life to this woman who is mentioned only briefly in the Bible. I look forward to more of your entries--and I believe your writing is beyond level 1. Great job.
Coleene, your writing, in particular, this fine article has such a wonderful "presence" about it. Your writing feels so graced by such spiritual intimacy.
A very touching interpretation of this heroic woman's struggle. You've reached back 2,000 years with perfect clarity.
This is perfect for the topic. Very nicely written. Congrats on being the Frontpage Showcase Author!

I must say, this is so touching... especially the last line...
I pictured the bleeding lady vividly thru your writing and felt what she would've been experiencing that time..

God bless you

What a creative piece. It really brings this story of the afflicted woman with the issue of blood home and puts the reader in her place.
The was absolutely beautiful; in concept and craft. Excellent.
I appreciate the way you've personalized this passage from the bible. While I was reading through your work, I felt like I was the one touching Jesus. I like the way you choose your words carefully. To not be too flowery yet truth revealing. To God be the glory.... Keep up the good work. Keep writing for God.