The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
A sweet illustration of enjoying and being thankful for those "ordinary" yet very special everyday times with family and friends.
03/15/08
Yep, after reading this I can easily picture your busy and full life.

A little closer attention to meter--you're nearlythere--and to more sophisticated rhymes would bump your poetry up just a notch.

This is a pleasant read--thanks!
03/15/08
This was a very sweet poem. I love it!
Laury