The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
It was a good idea to write it like this, but be careful with poetry--each verse should be the same length, each line should have the same number of syllables. You hit the nail on the head with your point.
03/15/08
A good reminder for all of us to consider.

Strive to improve your poetry by chosing unusual rhymes and fresh imagery.

I like your title, and the repetition in your stanzas.
03/15/08
Very good message set to poetry.
Laury