The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08
A sweet story, and you wrote it well. I loved your little details too--they made the story come alive.
03/14/08
Very well written. I could picture the scene with ease. I'm glad John took his opportunity!
03/15/08
Wow! What a wonderful description of this family reunion! I could see, feel, and hear everything going on! Great job! I also love your ending. Nice!
Laury