The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/08

I love it! It's a cute refreshing challenge entry and a poem at that. VERY
GOOD.
03/14/08
A poem! I love poems.
You did very well with the rhthmn and rhyme pattern.
Punctuate your sentences just as if you were writing paragraphs.(question marks, commas, periods, etc.)
Also, it's "staring", but that could easily be a typo.
You showed a writer's dilemma very well.
Thank you for writing this.
** THIS SPARKLES **
03/14/08
This made me laugh! How did you read my mind? Thanks for sharing this.
This is great! Very clever and fun way of doing this week's challenge. Well done.