The Official Writing Challenge
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A profound message, warning and encouragement!
Very nice devotional. Well written. :)
03/15/08
Beautiful! It's almost a poetical prose, almost a song.
You have 750 word limit. An example to illstrate your message would help the reader truly understand and remember it.
Thank you for writing this.
03/15/08
A lot of truth in this piece. Good job!
You made a very good point that even the people that we see every day need our help. Sometimes we pass people by, thinking that their lives are fine, but that isn't always the case. A person doesn't have to be homeless or at a soup kitchen to need help. Even the most well off people need us to comfort them. Good writing. Thank you for sharing.
Wow Jeff! This is a beautiful and profound wake up call. I can feel the Master's touch in your writing.