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I really enjoyed this -very nice play on words. It was great that he went fishing and STILL planned on making it to church!
very fun read! Toward the end it got a little wordy. I had to read over it a couple of times to stay with it. I love the premise and it was an enjoyable twist on the topic.
Fun and interesting way to present. A little tough to read because of the play on words and twist.
Interesting to read this play on east and west words. Fishing seems an appropriate backdrop for philosophical thought.
Something tells me you know about fishing. I appreciate the metaphorical references to East and West. Nice story. :0)
This was fun. I did like the play on words but it would have read easier if the paragraphs were broken up a bit.
Looking forward to reading more from you! Blessings, Lynda
I enjoyed reading your fisherman's thoughts while on the boat. It gives an interesting view. Nice job.