The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
I really enjoyed this -very nice play on words. It was great that he went fishing and STILL planned on making it to church!
06/06/05
very fun read! Toward the end it got a little wordy. I had to read over it a couple of times to stay with it. I love the premise and it was an enjoyable twist on the topic.
06/08/05
Fun and interesting way to present. A little tough to read because of the play on words and twist.
06/08/05
Interesting to read this play on east and west words. Fishing seems an appropriate backdrop for philosophical thought.
06/08/05
Something tells me you know about fishing. I appreciate the metaphorical references to East and West. Nice story. :0)
06/10/05
This was fun. I did like the play on words but it would have read easier if the paragraphs were broken up a bit.
Looking forward to reading more from you! Blessings, Lynda
I enjoyed reading your fisherman's thoughts while on the boat. It gives an interesting view. Nice job.