The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Lovely free verse, and I really like your parallel structure, using a preposition to end the first line of each stanza. First-class writing.
06/07/05
"Brilliant!" You are truely a master poet! Loved the way you combined facts and emotions in each stanza.
"Well Done"
06/08/05
Absolutely wonderful. This is a well written poetry example, and the message rings clear.
06/08/05
I really liked this. Great job! :0)
06/10/05
I usually prefer poems that rhyme instead of free verse, but this was nicely done :)
06/10/05
I thought this poem was wonderful. Well crafted, introducing each aspect of Jesus' final day. Do I sense a move in your future? Perhaps to the Intermediate level? Great job! :-) Blessings, Lynda
06/11/05
Great job, dear! I LOVED it! Kinda sad I told you about this site - here's another thing you're better at than me (LOL) - but kinda proud, too. I know talent when I see it! Love ya!
06/13/05
This was wonderfully written - so much thought put into it. Logical flow and heartfelt,too. Good job, and congratulations.
Your Poetry is a joy to read. Beautiful.