The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt like I was in the car with them. It is a beautiful thing when God can reach our kids through His clearly protective presence.
Nicely written - I like the way the dialogue carries the story along naturally. And good take on the topic. Keep writing!
03/09/08
Oh, you've got the teen's attitude perfectly! Good job with this pulse-racing story.
Super story. I was holding my breath when she realised she was in trouble. I'm so glad her daughter realised God's protection was on them. Well done!
03/11/08
Graet job.. you grabbed me at the beginning and had me right to the last word. Nicely done. Great use of dialogue!
03/11/08
argh! I'm shaking with Sherry! I've been on too many of those icy roads. You described it well. Good use of dialogue, also.
Good writing. Keep it up.
03/12/08
That mother daughter relationship is priceless. You captured it well. Thanks for writing.
Nice entry. I think you've captured what all parents truly desire - not the words of appreciation, but the love the words of appreciation show. Nice job. :)
03/13/08
Beautiful, well written story. See you up in level two!
03/19/08
Congratulations Debbit on first place. Great story. Well written. Keep up the good work.