The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your title. I can see the joy and freedom of learning the truth in your writing.
I can also see a touch of poetry in your words.
I like the way you put "The Beginning" at the end. It is the beginning of a new life.
Keep writing.
The big paragraph seems to run together a bit. Maybe if you broke it up and put in a bit of background for your character that would be better.

But I also liked the way you had "The beginning" at the end.
Kinda philosophical and thought-provoking. Consider writing this as free verse.
"Sometimes not knowing makes finding out rather special."... very cool line.