The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/08
Love this title and all that it implies! Great job! Yes, waiting for the perfect person to marry, the one that God has for you is the best! I love comparing it to the Savior's Wine! Excellent job!
Laury
03/08/08
This single girl agrees the best is yet too come. Loved the title. God bless
03/09/08
This is wonderful--what a refreshing attitude!

A few things to note: be mindful of the difference between "it's" and "its", and the spelling of "ecstasies". And if you work further with this, look for cliches or familiar expressions, and replace them with fresh, newly minted ones.

You're a good writer with a unique voice. I look forward to reading more from you.
03/10/08
"The land of indecision always seems to beckon me, wanting me to stay awhille." Great line! Keep writing ;-)