The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/08
Awesome - I loved this story! Thanks for sharing it. God bless :)
03/09/08
Is Sleeping Bag Ministries a real thing? If not, you've got a great idea here!

I was a bit confused about the girls' ages--they were teens, but you mentioned their "grade school class", and they acted younger than teens typically do.

Perhaps a bit of dialogue to help your readers get to know these characters a bit better?

Very sweet story.
03/10/08
I like this story. Thank you so much for sharing! Keep on writing!
Laury
03/10/08
Very fun! And very wise parents!