The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Thanks. I could almost see & hear my mom on the hunt if she were still with us. She'd be 85, wow!
06/08/05
We should have a special category for "memories". It is so wonderful to remember special moments like these.
06/10/05
This was wonderful -and well told. A great lesson on being young at heart!
06/10/05
This piece has the potential to be a real heart-toucher. I'd love to see an expanded version, with more descriptions and thoughts. Great effort!
Blessings, Lynda
I liked the surprise. I assumed you were describing a child. How cute to hear it was her first hunt at 85. The story left me wanting to read more.