The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
How sweet.. This was a cute story. I especially like his scripture pep talk to himself.
Good job
03/09/08
Children can be so sensitive about what their parents need, can't they?

I'm a bit nervous about your use of the painted black cloud; it may be too literally like this week's proverb.

A sweet story with some good depiction of emotions: stress, relief, etc. Well done.
03/10/08
Very nice story and you used my favorite Bible verse, too. Kids can be very insightful when we actually listen to them! Thanks for sharing!
Laury
03/10/08
Encouraged by his wife, daughter, and God all at once! Very cool! Nice story... keep writing.