The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/08
Very powerful story! Thank you.
03/10/08
Wonderful!
03/10/08
You have written very good descriptions. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
This is your kind of story and you tell it well. Kind of "sope" we all need! God bless you.
Remember the hanging modifers we spoke about. It seems your grammar took a holiday in the cart accident. It kinda confused me.

otherwise very realistically described.