The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/08
Very powerful story! Thank you.
03/10/08
Wonderful!
03/10/08
You have written very good descriptions. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
03/10/08
This is your kind of story and you tell it well. Kind of "sope" we all need! God bless you.
03/11/08
Remember the hanging modifers we spoke about. It seems your grammar took a holiday in the cart accident. It kinda confused me.

otherwise very realistically described.