The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/08
This sounds like a song! I can just hear it being sung.
03/10/08
Yep, this definitely reads like lyrics.

A few typos and missed words to fix up if you take this any further.

Wonderful to read this during the Easter season.
03/10/08
Oh yes, I can see this being sung, too. Thank you for sharing.
Laury