The Official Writing Challenge
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Very Nice! Think if it was broke up, it would read better, but that's just me. Wonderful thoughts and words!
I tend to agree. With matched verse it is important to watch measure and set up in stanzas. Nice meaning, with very little work this could be a winner.
a very nice poetic telling of the account!
You did a very good job telling the resurrection story in verse - not an easy thing. I agree with the other comments about breaking the poem up in stanzas for better flow. Also, I think you kind of lost your rhyme scheme - were you working toward a rhyme scheme, or free verse? - you set up a nice scheme in the first nine lines, but after that it kind of fell apart.