The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
I loved your descriptions. Especially 'Pastel Rainbow' what a great picture. Good job!
06/08/05
Great images throughout, break up your long paragraph for readability. Nice job, I truly enjoyed this work.
06/08/05
I agree with the above. Great images, but some of us old fogies need a teensy-weensy bit more "white space"...otherwise, good job!
06/10/05
Very nice. Good points -too bad we can't all have the excitment the children having finding the eggs to want to find Jesus.
I like lots of description too. It gives such a glorious view. I would also separate the paragraphs for easier reading
06/11/05
lots of wonderful word pictures.